All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 03'

Deliciously tense build up, great story and engaging characters. I'm routing from the sidelines, hoping for the happily ever after outcome and enjoying the wonderfully erotic picture painted. Please don't keep us in suspense too long.

A splendid first outing, sir! Nice pacing, great character development, lovely interplay. 5+fave.

What Dquioti and pcman1950 said. Agree 💯 percent and waiting for the next part of …

You are a good story teller and a great start. I do wish you would just combine your story into a longer format though. Look at this years Nude Day, and the stories were over 9 pages...

BINGO! All your well wishers are spot-on. Excellent outing… excellent!