All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 04'

Please sir, I want some more!

You have the ability to make things feel very real and that is quite a gift. Keep going

Really enjoying the story and your writing

Please continue!

"I actually had a moment of distraction with that thought trying to remember if the blue light sabers were Empire or Jedi but her ongoing moan snapped me immediately back to attention.". Loved it!

Excellent in every respect. Love the pace.

Thats hot