All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Happy to see this chapter posted

and it was worth the wait.Excellent chapter.Bittersweet meeting for Santana and her sister.

It's going to be very spicy when Aara is conscious. Cliff hangers GRRRR,looking forward to the next chapter

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyalmost 12 years ago
FINALLY!

Yay, great chapter, and please don't wait so long next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
*****

....finally!

Great chapter but I thought that Carmen was going to find her mate no Aara.

I can't wait for your next update.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 12 years ago
Taps my foot

Taps my foot and thinks of way to hurt you!!!!, Finally yay, great update now more please, your cliffhanger just about did me in lol.

oneboobeeoneboobeealmost 12 years ago

More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Pleaseeeeed Moree!!!!!!!

AnabelleLyrichAnabelleLyrichalmost 12 years ago
:D

Really loving this story!! But please have the next one up soon! Can't wait! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ahh!

Just read all of your instalments...I'M IN LOVE! Please continue!

jam_436jam_436almost 12 years ago
More

Loving the story :)

trubblemakurtrubblemakurover 11 years ago
ok so...

Dr Otto smelled something on Carmendi and Aara is Aaron's, that leaves Audrienne and Zachary so I think Audrienne is his mate cuz I don't think he is gay. we still have Rain and her siblings as potential mates.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literatealmost 2 years ago

This is so good...please continue. I'm hoping it's a completed version before looking ahead.

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