All Comments on 'Those Shoes Threeway'

Hot, seductive, well done

Absolutly peak production in the seamen factory during and after reading this amazingly sensual and sexy story. SUPER SUPER SUPER EROTIC and mouth-wateringly descriptive ! If I were to make one improvement suggestion it would be for more detailed physical discription of all three characters...ie hair, eyes, face shapes, builds, figures, asses and especially she-cocks.....but of course my hyper aroused imagination filled in quite a few of those gaps as I read ......there's never a fire when you've got a fire extinguisher load ready to deploy LOL

You are right in the critique. I worry a little about having everyone be beautiful, but I guess I don't have to. Once the sex starts and continuous to build, I know I don't care what my partner looks like, just that he is my partner. I guess I do close my eyes much of the time to focus on all the other waves of feelings while being intimate. I am working on the next story, and the first section ** Getting Ready ** will add more of that detail. No body is perfect, but I enjoy my athletic one.