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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I cant stop reading this! It's awsome,who dosnt love a good amount of romance?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There is potential to the storyline, but it is written rather clumsily. Needs some meat to the bones, and a good editor.

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I used to write on wattpad and it was called Deep Desire Fantasy but now I'm transferring all my stories here and wordpress. For early release read of The website https://eroticstories472753318.wordpress.com/