All Comments on 'Thrill of the Moment'

A sexy little quicky. Then wtf the last 2 sentences. If you want to give your story plot then start with a plot. If its just a brief sexual scene then don't try to add plot at the last second. Gives your story a weak finish and diminishes any realism. If they were there to discuss a divorce how did they end up on the hood making out?

Interesting, very well written and I am to ascertain that the "Loving Wife" part must have passed by for the divorce papers to be in the picture. We definitely need at least a follow-on chapter or an epilogue for closure!