All Comments on 'Through My Son's Telescope Ch. 02'

Very HAWT can't wait for the next chapter

At some point in time, I hope the author contnues the series.

Was that It?

More on the way, chapter three is in the works.

more please

Come on, don't stop now

Please stick to one tense it is so simple.

"That sent Matt to the bathroom, certain that he was locking the door behind him. He took a pair of Rita's soiled panties, slipped off his pants and underwear, then sat on the toilet.

Rita stops her workout, grabs a laundry basket and stands by the bathroom door. Her fingers were in her pussy, obviously primed for what she hopes will be mad hot sex with her gullible son."

Two sentences together, the first one is written in past tense but the second in present tense. It just doesn't make sense.

Stop ruining a good story.

wish this got finished

There is many good lines in your story, but they all died off in your attempt to make the story sizzle. You have a beautiful imagination. Hopefully you'll get better.

What happened to Judy and David. Please continue as I can see be great read and would love to see them sharing between them