by Padre33
I'm becoming less interested in the sex and more so the lot. Great stuff! The character interaction reflects the same thoughts and emotions that regular people in a similar situation would be reacting to - very "real". 5*
They sure have decisions and plan to make. But they can continue to be a loving family. I still think sexy Chris can have some sexy chest hair for his masculine, muscular chest!
The story it's still lovely and romantic so far. The characters are very real, reflecting on the past, the drama involving the hard decisions they have to make to have a future together... all very well done. Ava is very adorable, and the way all the main characters interact with her always make me smile. I love this story.
And finally! Someone who knows how to do anal sex properly and write about it. Writers and readers, this is how it's done. I'm tired of reading from authors (darkmind222 is a good example) who write about it all the time but know nothing about the basics preparations (proper lubrication, hygiene, and stretching) to do it safely, erotic, and make it work to feel good, and being extra careful like Chris did is also important. Most writers here just shove dicks up the asses like it's nothing, and worse, some authors (again, darkmind222 comes to mind) do the nasty habit of ass-to-mouth like it's yummy (FFS...) making the whole event dreadful to read. And like in real life, not everybody is built for that or enjoy it, and Emily found out about it in the best way possible for her, making the whole event still nice in the end.
But enough of that. You're doing a great work here. Yes, the latest parts are short, but real life gets in the way of everybody, so keep your own pace to write the next chapters and never rush. I always say quality over quantity is better, and yours, is 100% quality.
Take care.
The story is really good. It’s got a solid backstory, setting up a scenario that could work - not something outlandish. I’m looking forward to more.
Suggestion: stop using the first paragraphs to summarize previous chapters. Just one line advising readers to start with Pt 1.