by Mergansa
It would have been good if the husband could have fucked euphoria at the till but all in all a good read
but am drawn in like a moth to the flame by your writing about them. It is clear you have some experience with intelligent, amoral women.
As someone already mentioned, I would have like the husband to fuck Euphoria and made a date with the other customer in front of his wife.
That was really odd. I couldn’t decide if it was a 5 or a 1. Hence 3*.
The execution of the scene was well done
It good ...
when a writer gives readers a beforehand warning
on what the story is about.
But here the writer should rethink his warning.
Because it doesn't include if it's pro or con.
And that is the big difference
between groups of readers on LW.