All Comments on 'Thruple'

Fantastic start! I look forward to seeing where this goes, well done!

More, please

More!!! Part 2?

There better be a part 2 to this so we find out if Lauren has a cock

Thank you for all the comments. I am busy at work on the next chapter and, thanks to some advice from Montgomery Quinn, I now know that I need to add some indication of a change in scene to aid the reader (my editing didn’t come through as expected, sorry).

When the next chapter goes live I will post a link to it in the Literotica subreddit. My username on there is the same as here if you wish to follow me. Thanks for reading!

The premise is really good. However, I think you introduced too much and too quickly for the reader to appreciate the foreshadowing. Slow down and focus the reader’s attention to a character and let it develop. I would love to read future works. Great beginning!!

Really good. I could definitely relate to his relationship with

Jess when the magic had ceased and how he fell into this situation. A very plausible story line.

I can't read a story who's title tells you what the story is about and it's spelled wrong. C'mon! It's throuple, as in three + couple, not thruple.