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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good visuals

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I liked this too

Often banter-heavy stories begin to drag and seem like the author is trying to show off how terribly clever he is - you avoided that trap and did a great job. And "turned part of me to stone"; heh heh, worth an eye roll but also a chuckle. 5 stars

Rugrat60Rugrat60over 11 years ago
Nicely Done

Well done and good descriptions.

I Enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I am Kenyan lady and this story was quite an interesting read. Thumbs up for a good job. Would love to have an experience like that, but i have to find a soul mate first. My biological clock is ticking fast heh. Anyway, thank you for a well written story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A GOOD READ

it was a wonderful story, you did a very nice job

keep up the writing , and these two could be a couple in another story.

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Latest update: April 2024 My next two artworks have been submitted and should be published sometime this week. Both continue my 'Mouthful of' series with facesitting and watersports being the themes explored. These will be my last April art submissions. Usually when I submit ...