by XtinaSmith2017
Love this story, hope there's a sequel with more crossdressing
i am always looking for your stories , always outstanding .i can only say awesome again. of course i ask if you could continue this and rite of passage etc.thanks for this engaging read. all the best.
syper sexy! i hope you continue this one! maybe they stay together and his friends are wowed by his massive dick. maybe they switch it up? maybe she has finally found a dick she doesnt mind fucking? i dont know. your story, your ideas. good job though. keep it up!
This was spectacular!
I REALLY hope you will make a sequel - I want to see how this develops!
Awesome, loved the gently shemdom. Hope u keep him as a boy instead of sissifying him.
Perfect story I hope you continue with a part 2, 3, ect.! Hope his friends are blown away by his massive dick. Hope he gets to use his dick on her like she doesnt mind fucking hids tool? Keep it up!
Your buildup was perfectly timed and executed. The linking of orgasm to the pounding he received will make him want it forever, the poor boy. :)
She is correct. He will be hers.
your stories are so fucking perfect... especially the descriptions in this story was amazing...
and plz consider to continue southern hospitality, rite of passage and home invasion (at least for one chapter)
As always, another insanely sexy story :) keep up the great work. Can't wait for more of all of you stories. Thank for sharing them all here!
one of the better stories on this site. thanks for sharing. still hoping you'll do a "worked up" part 2 : ) my favorite
Wow great story, so wish I could experience something like that, fuck me that was so hot!
How I have loved reading this scrumptious story of yours , such twist and turns for your well endowed virgin and his Lusty Seductress . Please do try to find the time to write some more in this story line , you have me hooked xxx
As I said, I rarely offer feedback even though, as a fellow writer, I encourage and relish it. Nevertheless, a story that truly warrants it.
I don't normally read stories that include BDSM as part of the mix, however, you portrayed this partnership so lovingly that I was drawn into it and never looked back. As another commenter said, you put several twists and turns that kept me curious and as another mentioned that the story demands a sequel. I agree and urge you to consider it.
Not wanting to steer your creation but offering a suggestion, perhaps we can see true love bloom between these two unlikely lovers.
Keep writing, you have a gift that should be shared.
-dreamweaver594
As I said, I rarely offer feedback even though, as a fellow writer, I encourage and relish it. Nevertheless, a story that truly warrants it.
I don't normally read stories that include BDSM as part of the mix, however, you portrayed this partnership so lovingly that I was drawn into it and never looked back. As another commenter said, you put several twists and turns that kept me curious and as another mentioned that the story demands a sequel. I agree and urge you to consider it.
Not wanting to steer your creation but offering a suggestion, perhaps we can see true love bloom between these two unlikely lovers.
Keep writing, you have a gift that should be shared.
-dreamweaver594
such a beautiful deflowering ... loved every bit of this ... the build, the action ... outstanding writing.
This was so hot! I'm not even into bondage, but your such a good writer that you drew me in.
Sure Shannon is somewhat a shemale dominatrix but she is a caring one,by letting Cody cum when she was fucking him.Also Shannon declared to keep Cody simply because he was so effeminate and willing to please Shannon.Honestly tho Shannon and Cody would make a great couple,but for the record Cody should ditch his so-called friends as they don't give a shit about him.Lastly Shannon was described as late 20's or 28 or 29,while Cody is either a highschool senior or college freshmen,so making Shannon about 10 years older,but my point is both Cody and Shannon should date and get married in a followup story.