All Comments on 'Timber Ch. 01'

by MMPOTD

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Do not change point of view from one paragraph to the next!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Punctuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. Can't to see what ideas you carve out for Ch. 2

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