by whydowewrite
Love it, can't wait to find out more about your characters. Hopefully it takes advantage of all of his power.
Why do time stop stories all seem to revolve around a nerd who just wants to get even with some bitch? I can understand wanting to experiment, that is what makes this kind of story (and porn) so much fun. But when someone abuses the gift he has been given like the main character in this story, then it is just a waste of time. If you do write more episodes I hope that you expand your hero's horizons because, at this point, I really do not like him so much. Think about it because he could do so much more.
Roger.