All Comments on 'Time Flies Ch. 01'

rippley?

Thank you.

See, it was not that hard to defocus on your usual rant on all political stuffs. Better focus on mainstream story line and good start of an awesome story. Thank you WW.....

The tension builds...

Well I see you waited until the end to spring your trap. Very good timing, by the way/ Keep up the suspense, somewhere in the next chapter you will provide some clues. Thanks for your great stories.

The next chapter of the story has been submitted and hopefully will be published soon.

Jnr Detective Troy solves a new homicide whilst finishing her homework, by asking the IC all the right questions.

Another good start to what seems like another double cheeseburger. 5+*

Iceman

5 stars!

Thorough enjoyed it,

the balancing actions will continue, no matter what happens, old fashioned adversity arises. TK U MLJ LV NV

Whatever, loved the penultimate line.

*****Nice opening chapter. Thanks for sharing.