All Comments on 'Time for Some Fun Pt. 02'

You sounded apologetic in the intro that there were only one and half sex scenes in this chapter. Don't be. It isn't the number of scenes that matters, it's how good they are.

The scenes in this chapter were hot as all hell.

I like the characters and world you are crafting. Please continue to avoid the cliches of this type of story (dodging the brother trope made me laugh as I thought "oh no, not this already" when the brother was introduced). I suggest avoiding making the awful classmates to formulaic, I am a bit nervous about chapter 3 which I see has a revenge theme. I would love to see one of this genre of story have some understated cleverness and you are well on your way to bucking the trend.

Definitely one of the better stories I have ever read here. Keep it up (I will now strain mightily to resist the urge to follow that sentence with funny wink-and-a-nod quip).

I'm a little confused about the 'cheating' tag for this chapter, unless Devon was already in a relationship