by DiamondsR4Never
I have to say I'm really enjoying this series. I found it by accident (it was recommended at the end of another story) and I'm glad I found it.
Who wouldn't want to have a superpower that lets them right the small injustices dealt them every day. And if it lets them have some sexy fun at the same time, so much the better.
I just discovered that there are another dozen entries in the series. Yay!
Interesting to hear a time freeze story from a female's perspective. Excellent details, it makes the story development much more exciting :)
I'm really enjoying this because it's so far against the trope of the slightly rapey closet dweller that gets timelord powers. It's great to see a story from a female perspective.
Also really like that you've given some thought as to how you'd progressively manipulate arousal during time stop.
I look forward to seeing how this story develops. it's refreshing.
It is so hot and so funny. Can't wait to see Aria get her revenge on Lauren!
I enjoyed it, you have excellent ideas working against the cliched convention. My only criticism is that you are falling prey to haste and spell check. waste-waist, roomer-rumer, a punctuation ambiguity where I thought Kyle wanted to fuck Aria's eye.
Editing aside you have the important things you need interesting relatable characters, a good story and you bring something new to this type of story.
I look forward to chapters 4, 5, 6 and on.