All Comments on 'Time for Some Fun Pt. 03'

Go get 'em, Aria!!!

I enjoyed it, you have excellent ideas working against the cliched convention. My only criticism is that you are falling prey to haste and spell check. waste-waist, roomer-rumer, a punctuation ambiguity where I thought Kyle wanted to fuck Aria's eye.

Editing aside you have the important things you need interesting relatable characters, a good story and you bring something new to this type of story.

I look forward to chapters 4, 5, 6 and on.

It is so hot and so funny. Can't wait to see Aria get her revenge on Lauren!

I'm really enjoying this because it's so far against the trope of the slightly rapey closet dweller that gets timelord powers. It's great to see a story from a female perspective.

Also really like that you've given some thought as to how you'd progressively manipulate arousal during time stop.

I look forward to seeing how this story develops. it's refreshing.

Interesting to hear a time freeze story from a female's perspective. Excellent details, it makes the story development much more exciting :)

I’m enjoying this. Thank you.

I have to say I'm really enjoying this series. I found it by accident (it was recommended at the end of another story) and I'm glad I found it.

Who wouldn't want to have a superpower that lets them right the small injustices dealt them every day. And if it lets them have some sexy fun at the same time, so much the better.

I just discovered that there are another dozen entries in the series. Yay!