All Comments on 'Time Gentlemen Please'

Refreshing use of wife! I enjoyed it.

This shit is filled with run-on sentences. Also, there is a difference

between declarative and interrogative sentences, which this person

does not seem to understand.

It's so badly written that what ever erotic merit this may

have had is destroyed by trying to figure out what this

person is trying to write -- and failing.

Your bio states that you are from the UK. So then, why can't you spell "arse" correctly? I detest writers who pander to the Yanks and spell it as "ass!"

The story was hot. It would be stupid of me to be critical of minor grammar details as my previous critics as they are without a doubt- dickless. For if they had a dick, they would have looked beyond the syntax into content. Good job Kayce69. I don't care where you are from, or even pretend to be from- you write a great story.

There is nothing erotic about a sick story where a man lets his wife get raped and then makes cheap shots at her after you jerk. As for those who thought this sicko story was erotic ... how about someone jamming a bottle up your orifice and see how erotic you feel.

Worth only one point.

What a fucking waste of time reading it.

The guy is an arsehole, so is the silly writer.

This asshole of a 'husband' does not deserve a wife. The wife did not deserve what happened to her. If she finds out what he did not do, she should stake him out in the highway, rape and asault are neither funny nor justified. Bartenders and B girls all over the world drink colored water in lieu of getting drunk. This group needs to be hauled down to eh police station then into court.

Real "Men" do not have to rape women, they are just looking for an excuse to abuse someone smaller and weaker.

The "husband" should be castrated and fed his own pitiful cock.

This was not a "loving wife" story, rather it was sexual attack without consent -- RAPE.

You're one sick fuck. No wonder loving wives is going down the drain. Assholes like you posting.

1. Wrong Category - Belongs in Non-Consential/Rape

2. As soon as it went past the forced drinks, he should have called the police. A husband seeing his wife raped would have done something.

Yes. I agree with most of the comments below. Definitely the wrong category. I really hope this never happened in real life xxx