All Comments on 'Time Never Waits Pt. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

dam good the mysteries just keep coming, but when is the burn out going to happen?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good cliffhanger!! Editing in this one was not as buttoned down as others but I love following the story. Please keep this storyline going!!!

drafendrafen5 months ago

This has become one of my favorite stories. It is a dard wait for the next chapter,but the intricate details you develop of two different eras make the wait worth it. Keep writing.

ltjohnandbeckyltjohnandbecky5 months ago

Great story best I’ve read on this site. Keep up the good work.

MaxGirth69MaxGirth695 months ago

I enjoy your three stories and look forward to reading a new chapter whenever I see it

SlofredSlofred5 months ago

SO the previous owner did some underground storage/subterfuge activities' just as you have done. Great cliff hanger. 5 stars and looking forward to more as soon as we can get it. THANK YOU

redlion75redlion755 months ago

So he gets 2 women pregnant and they decided to take off and really doesn't give a fuck.1 of them he claims to be the love of his life and the other is his own mother. Didn't his dad take off when he was a kid? So he should know what it's like to be without a good father in his life

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