All Comments on 'Time Smut Ch. 07'

Hey guys, this series is not getting very many readers or many good reviews, so I'm thinking about hanging up my smut hat and writing a romance novel or a children's book or something instead.

Plus some greedy corporate jerk made a copywrite claim when I put timesmut on Amazon, even though I wrote the whole book! :-( its dark times in Basiljet land.

It would be so awesome if you would leave a comment and tell me what you didn't like about the story, because I'm just learning how to write and I can't tell if I'm just bad at it or if the constant sex/freeuse world is just too niche.

Thank you so much for your input.

Julie

Hey man, It's a little confusing and convoluted, but the plot is great and id love to read more.

:-)

Maybe you could write a one off bang fest between James and pepper for us

I've been really enjoying this series so far, and would certainly love to see more.

My only issue is that sometimes I'm a little confused as to the mechanics of what it happening. Like I'm fine with the strangeness of the cartoon world, but I've no idea of how Pepper's apartment living-room / kitchen is laid out.

Probably just a silly thing from me, considering the other oddities that I'm totally fine with; really enjoying it all though n_n it's an engaging read

finish this wonderfully wacky story! I'm loving it!