All Comments on 'Time to Grow Up'

This is great! Sure, there are a few grammatical errors, but the overall story is profound. You should write more often. I'm off to read your other story now. I'll put a @@ in front of my comment if you want to hear from me again.

Thank you so much for your feedback! I've written just for myself for years, but decided I would share some of it. I have another that hopefully will be up today or tomorrow. All 3 are completely different, but I wanted to see what story generated interest before deciding which to continue. I just learned there are volunteer editors, so I will be taking advantage of that for future writings. Again, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.

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