All Comments on 'Time to Yourself'

But I hate cheaters and I really hope some how karma appears and she somehow pays. Me time is acceptable but should have limits.

Keep up the good work.

Please write the next part soon as I loved it

Enjoyed your story, but please stick to one tense. You moved from past tense to present tense and back. I believe a story flows best in past tense as you are telling what has happened but your shifts were a bit distracting.

I really enjoyed the slow realisation that she really just needed to get off

Very good, can we have part two please

What a great story, I certainly hope there is going to be a part 2! Loved the slight hesitation , of her wondering if she's letting things go too far but ultimately surrendering to the sheer pleasure of it.