All Comments on 'Timeless Love Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great!

Great story! ive been keeping up with this one! Cant wait for more! Thanks

sacrificedangelsacrificedangelover 16 years ago
Brilliant

I love your stories, and this one is no exception, all the characters are so wonderfully writen, you really end up loving Cynara, and your providing furture plots in your chapters making the reader know there is going to be more to this story, like Cynara getting the letter for dinner at her new friend's house, lol. Look forward to reading more, as always.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
How about making your female characters a bit more clever?

Even though I enjoyed the story so far I am frustrated with the intellegence of your female character. As she is from the future she seems to have been sadly poorly educated. Hopefully in your next stories you see to it as she is a disgrace in her obvious ignorance on many subjects...

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