by wishinandhopin
getting upset at Drake fucking around on her drooped the score even further
cheaters are scum, hypocritcal cheaters are even worse
Sure seems to fit into modern life, doesn't it? All those extra women floating around. Gotta go somewhere.
I give you high marks for an interesting, readable erotic story. Don't let the bastards grind you down! This and the first half were far better than average.
R.
I understand why you did it wishinandhopin.
It is much easier to write about "hot sex" than dramatic emotions and conflicting characters 😪.
Got Drake out of the way. The difficult writing, the drama, left with him.
Now all you have to do is write about fifty year old MFF sex. Should have made your characters much younger.
It does fit this site well. But I'm glad I don't have to see it.
Gave you 3*s.
Good luck on your next story wishinandhopin. I'm going back... to the forest.
AMerryman
Nowhere did it say that Nan had committed to be exclusive. They are not married either.