All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 08'

and what is she to think when all your cum leaks out her arse, as it always does?

This is part 8 of twenty-odd, and you already appear to have run out of ideas. I had hoped for a storyline, a preplanned destination, at least a bit of variety. I am not going to bother with the rest of it.

Please stop with the gay stuff, first him fondling a dick, then thinking about eating creampie, now fantasising about DP'ing, being up against dick.

Please stop ruining the story, I would like it a lot more if you edited such things out.

That post from 2 years ago. That anonymous has some serious issues. First of all being on an erotic lit site and being a homophobe is one thing but considering DP to be gay? Man, they're probably even more messed up now.

Love your story, hope the negative people didnt get you down at the time. You wrote great stuff and continued to do so since then

Another sexual adventure with a poor ,sexy ,defenceless beauty. I'm probably going to complete this young mans adventures!!Looking forward to getting to read the next episode!!