All Comments on 'Timestopper Ch. 14: Free Use'

I'm honestly not sure how I feel about this. I know Nick technically (drug?) raped a woman (Adriana?) earlier and did others some harm, but since he was neutralised as a threat and has been on the other side if his shenanigans (and said rape was undone long ago), isn't this a bit... excessive? The cage is one thing, but the hardly-prepped-for fisting and the pimping out to total strangers... Even Nick never did that, so isn't Zach becoming even worse than he is at this point for setting this high-risk situation, dangerous situation up? Not to say Nick was an angel, but... IDK; I guess this'll be the most unpopular opinion here, but I just had to get it out. Part of me does look forward to seeing how you'll wrap this particular storyline out, though; please don't keep us in suspense long!

PS I now see I should've read the content warning before I read the story. I've learned my lesson on that score.

I'm wondering when Nick will start servicing his Frat brothers as the big old cum whore that he's become. Hope that was a permanent marker the guys at the motel used on him. That will take some explaining. Chapter #14 was another great one, love the pay back for this bully. You said you'd probably end this story somewhere between chapter #17 to #20. I hope it's the latter, this wonderful imaginative story is one of my favorites. I really hate to see it end. MLF

I just want to respond to some of Tyray's comments (which I totally appreciate), and will probably expand the content warning at the beginning once I'm finished the series and do a final editing before I leave it. First, I'd forgotten I'd taken out an explanatory note in an earlier chapter that articulated some of my porn logic. First, the only STD in the timestopper world is pregnancy. Second every butthole is always perfectly clean and will never tear. Obviously these are unrealistic assumptions in real life, but in timestopper world somebody got a genie and wished sex had way fewer complications.

As to Zach's moral position here, it's obviously not great. There's a reason I didn't show Zach in this chapter, cause it is a bit over the top, and I really don't think of him as a psychopath. I will say I may've undermined the extent of Nick's badness by being purposefully vague about his crimes, but in my mind Zach isn't doing anything to Nick that Nick hadn't done to others (for example refer back to the SAE chapter and Zach specifically mentions a fisting video, and even his first interaction with Zach involved toilet stuff). I obviously should have done a better job at articulating that, but honestly, fundamentally, the stuff with Nick is basically a different series. Timestopper is about a kid who gets handed a watch that allows him to have an ideal college experience, and then we have a side story that's every dark fantasy I can think of based off a fundamentally non-consensual power over people.

Oh, poor Nick, just because he beat and brutalized people. Just because he forced them to do disgusting sexual acts while filming them. Then blackmailed those people by threatening to go public with the videos. And drugged and raped both men and women. Just because he did these few minor little things is it fair to make him suffer like this? BOO HOO let's all cry for this sweet innocent young man. FUCK NICK, that rotten SOB is getting every fucking thing he deserves. MLF

A content warning expansion would be thoughtful, but I won't say it's needed. (That explanatory note/no STD or STI/earlier wishes/safe butthole part, though, IS, IMO.) Either way, you have my blessing and support as an artist.

I never meant to imply that Zach was a psychopath, sociopath, narcissist, etcetera– budding or fully formed. I'm sorry if I gave that impression.

And I don't think you undermined Nick's harming others so much as we grew distant from it since it was some chapters ago, (SOME OF) it was literally undone, and we're now at the point of waiting to see how this subplot plays out. I have some hopes for Nick, but I'll take whatever you, as his creator, see fit to render him. Happy writing!

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