All Comments on 'Timid Neighbor'

I was enjoying the story but then it fell apart in a very short space of time given the nice slow build up between the main characters and I'm not sure at all how the last few paragraphs are supposed to provide a satisfactory ending?

You are a talented storyteller and I encourage you to continue writing your stories. Minimal errors helped the readability and the characters, backstory, and buildup are well done. I’m not thrilled with the last act, but that happens occasionally. Looking forward to further efforts.

Yeah, you done fucked up what was building up to be a great story....... asshole!

Sorry, but God that was awful!