All Comments on 'Timing is Everything Pt. 01'

Great beginning! Like your MC, I’m not a fan of better-than-thou hypocrites; unfortunately, most I’ve known would not be described as Marcy-like. Anxious to see the price she pays.

Uh . . . The word is coMPtroller - not controller

Stopped reading at that point. Run a grammar check

I love the comptroller / controller comment. The guy stops reading a story on a sex site because of it, yet doesnt realise they are two separate and valid roles. Bet his wife has a wild sex life. As to the story, not bad, and yes, realise it is only part 1 but put more detail into the sex scenes. Looking forward to part II

Nice start to a series, however many parts that it might turn out to be. Perfect break to cliffhang the next part! Leaves the further direction of the story on a knife's edge. Nicely done! 5

Yeah 5 stars. I really love the description of his thinking and the way you describe what he was doing and why. What I love the most is the cliff hanger. him thinking what is next while she sobs.

Pappasleaze!

She may end up divorced but Mr Photographer can be brought up on felony charges..