by LongTermHubby
By some Asswipe author trying to troll this category .
Please don't give the asshole any of the attention it seeks. Just vote 2 *'s and let it go. Eventually maybe they'll quite coming here just to piss off the readership .
He thinks he's smart by getting all these new identities and posting troll stories. Pathetic.
This wife was stupid...Her husband was gay and she didn't figure it out when she saw: "I thought the sight of all those naked female bodies might get him interested. To my surprise, I saw he was checking out the well-endowed men"!!! 1*
For sure Not a Long Term Hubby...Soon she will divorce his wimp ass and starts her new life as a whore...No need for the continuation of this story...The introduction was bad enough...1*
Funny how one ANON does cut and paste for a comment. At least take the time to actually write a comment. 5 Stars
I do visualize a short term annulment, TK U MLJ LV NV
but couldn't you at least make some aspect of it original? Too lame and predictable. Guess you do the best you can with what you got. Pathetic.
ONLY WIFE HATERS AND B.T.B. STORIES ALLOWED HERE.
Most comments here are from gay women haters anyway.
This will go in the direction of abusive toward dumb hubby.why can't they just fuck him like her friend does. I know a few couples that try this out and none have worked . All wind up divorced , to much jealousy involved. She knew his dick was small before they married, if sex was good a one time than encourage hubby a let him know what to do to you. Now he's a loser small dick in woman's underwear being humiliated and bossed around by some strange guy with a bigger cock. All the people I know that did this never got humiliated and also fucked other girls and it still never worked. One of the couple always falls for another at some point and that's when the lying cheating sneaking starts up
Humiliating her husband.Gee? How erotic.? Not!!! Pathetic story done a thousand times here .Always the same.No vote
who loves these stories . I gave it a 5!!!!
This seems to be only a preview of a possibly interesting series
A good start but only a start.
Let's see the sequels
So if you are a man right, and you are not gay right, but you are wearing your wifes panties and you show some dickhead that wants to turn your wife, your soulmate into his brain dead whore what you are wearing, what the fuck are you? I mean really are you retarded, mentally ill, why would you do this. Explain why a sane normal guy would ever do this and I'll give you a 2.
Sorry, I have had experience of one of these sickos, had my underwear stolen off our clothesline. Police could not do anything unless there was a witness, they just said "it happens, these men have mental health issues".
sadly
most of your rating will be what people think of your subject matter.
as if erotica is a popularity contest (it isn't)
i'm a big cuck fan
not much into 3 somes (awkward city)
not much into feminizing hubby
the panty thing will probably keep me from reading further chapters,
but other people that like it.
I see this is your first submission
always try to be clear in title / description what is going on
remember you are writing for those who fave your story
NOT for those who don't like it.
listen to comments from your fans
ignore the flamers
Don't let the trolls get you down. They probably don't even wipe their cum off their hand before spouting their indignation.
Slamming others for daring to have a different opinion is a far better definition of troll that what seems to reside in your mind.
and you won't get a 1-star vote here at the end. Fair enough?
The story was fairly well written, but needed a bit more of a plot. You will get better with practice. A good cuck story is hard to write, and even harder to get a good rating on Literotica.
Don't get discouraged by all these very hateful anonymous posts. Many of them don't even read your story. They read others' comments on the comment link and then pile on their own hate. Too lazy or too dumb, not sure. They get their rocks off by insulting others about the subject of the story. I suspect that they are closet sadists who just want to hurt someone. The irony is that most of them can't write a readable sentence. LOL
Once his wife demonstrates she has neither love or respect for him, he packed his things, closed out the bank accounts, cancelled the credit cards and moved far, far away. The slut Tina had to pay for a divorce using abandonment. She neither heard from or talked to Brad ever again. As she deserved. End to a really stupid story.
We all knew it was going to be a spank squad, empty, cuck by the numbers story when this little "never ever used a million times" gem hit "Brad's not very well endowed and he's rather quick on the trigger. That said, he's a wonderful husband and I love him very much. It's just that he leaves me frustrated."