by Jay142
would continue to be a great story without jimmy
Both Ron and Tina have grown so close that the extra person in the relationship is a bit of a downer. Drop the extra people and the the relationship grow between the two of them. There is more then enough going on with the Mother and brother to put tension in the story. If they truly have fallen in love let it be about them and the trials with the extended family.
Otherwise a good story. Let it be about them.
I really enjoyed this from start to finish. Such brilliant teasing and then the explosion when they finally got together. I hope there is more to this story ?
But please, don't bring his friend Jimmy into the mix of Tina and Ron, it will spoil the dynamic that you've built between the two of them.
Just don't leave this here though, give it a proper and fitting ending !
Rapier
Please make a chapter 5! I never want this to end. Lol such a great read!
This has some much potential for more adventures, so please don't stop now.
Post college, children, marriage and a lot more besides.
Another man would not work, but another girl might ?
Just please, DON'T STOP NOW !
Rapier
That was a fantastic series. It needs a better conclusion though like some long term finality to it.
But it was hot
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It seems it's been 4 years since this was posted and we're all hoping for another chapter. It's jice to have Ron acknowledge to Tina that he has some jealousy borne of insecurity. While sharing my now ex, I had the same problem. Afraid she would like another man more than me, and leave me for him. And that's what eventually happened