All Comments on 'Tina Lost The Bet'

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hpinyakhpinyakover 3 years ago

Random, but good. Is this going to tie in with your other universe?

writingsomethingnewwritingsomethingnewover 3 years agoAuthor
@hpinyak

I could see the characters showing up in other judicial stories one day, but this was meant to be a one off. This was a palate cleanser for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Great story! The dialogue is really good, realistic and light-hearted. I just wish somebody had taken a camera or a phone out to take some photos of Tina, that really adds to the ENF imo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A good hot story that will hopefully never happen in real life.

Gosh! Another keeper.

Bill S.

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