by WrightWrongs
Fine premise.
Nicely told.
Nicely paced.
Would have preferred if Robert wasn't the one to finish himself off with his own hand.
Better if it had been Bree -- but only after she'd edged him extensively, both cock and balls.
Nevertheless, a great story.
Five stars.
Wow, this is one of the best and most fresh things I've read here in a long time. So well written, and so erotic. I find it hard to write from the female point of view and feel I'm being authentic; I had to check back a couple of times to remind myself who the author was. (Although, just because your Office Hours series is written from the male perspective, I guess that doesn't mean you're a man. You're just really good.) I really felt like I wasn't just *reading* a woman's perspective; I actually felt like somehow I was *feeling* Tina's emotions and desires. Brilliant.
That's such a high compliment coming from you, Rimbaud17, an author whose works I admire. Thank you!