by Wannabe Chick
Very nicely written with a wonderful plot. Thank you for your effort with this small masterpiece.
This one is hot!! A shy girl with a huge package!! There's gotta be a sequel to this..
great story, really well done.
abolsutly loved it
please write a sequel!!!!
It's stupid how many other terrible stories are rated above your excellent work. Keep writing, Lit needs more writers like you.
Your writting is so good, i was there, it was my ass being licked and my ass being fucked! Love your style and prose.
This is an excellent story about real love. The emotions seem to be very real. This writer is excellent.
Thanks for a story where the girl was feminine and not a butch ball bashing person.
I love the idea of a soft, sexy, feminine T-girl...one who wants to really act, smell, feel, exude femininity and be treated like an erotic beautiful woman.
I would marry this one...thanks for the story.
I did enjoy your story, but I do think it would have been hotter if Tina had a normal sized member. It seems every single story is about monster sized cocks. While it plays to the fantasies of many, for me, it just "jumps the shark" when EVERY character just HAS to be huge.
That said, I like the way you took the time to flesh these people out (no pun intended). Kudos and keep writing!
I hope Tina overcomes her reluctance and tops Jordan in the next chapter. She needs to listen to him and realize that she is a special woman and stop worrying about not being feminine.
lovely story-Tina is so hot-love reading about tgirls, [being with them is even better], like how these two evolve their relationship-nicely written, hot sex, [including the ws] thanks
Your stories are tender rather than raunchy and that makes them all the sexier.
My only criticism is that for anal sex lube is a must for pleasure and to avoid injuring delicate tissues. It is unrealistic to think that anyone can have a half hour of butt fucking without lots of lube. That is the only thing that detracts from the realism of your otherwise very realistically written stories.
While this story somewhat follows the same story-line as Rebecca's Secret, I disagree with the comment that lube is necessary to enjoy anal sex. If not for several experiences to the contrary, I would be inclined to adhere to conventional wisdom about the necessity for copious lubrication. Saliva was the lube of choice by my Thai transsexual. She applied it to the head of my cock several times by wetting her finger tips. Once penetration was achieved, it felt as if I were inside the vagina of a genetic female. And there was no trace of fecal matter on my cock after we were done. Of course, my semen provided for a slippery exit. The same was true in another encounter about five years ago. My partner wanted to see if penetration would occur with saliva as the only lubricant. So, I find the use of saliva to be highly realistic. Admittedly, it takes an exceptional individual to rely solely on its use in anal sex.
I had no intention of reading the earlier stories but after this, that's my next stop. All around comfortable read with a very well thought out story. Bravo !
A good start to a great story, this should be chapter 1 of 10, you really should continue this story.
I loved the Rebecca series and this arc, as well! It’s been 14 years since you’ve done anything here...write more or tell what has happened in your life since then!
And that's it ? No more ?
After 15 years I guess there won't be, just so annoying.
So only 3 stars from me due the disappointment of leaving this in mid-flow.
Rapier
I liked this story although I was hoping to have it last longer. Maybe have Rebecca come out and the three of them join in for a three way. That would be totally hot.
They live in a state of Delusion, They will never be a woman, just a gay guy faking it. No ovaries, No ovum (eggs), and No uterus, No periods. Just a trans-gentleman.