by Ramslamher
I'm Chinese, and funnily, 4'11, and I like race play.
I couldn't finish reading the first page. The deliberately broken grammar was the turn off.
the comments about the story being racist hit home. I wanted the story to be about shifting power dynamics and making her an Asian girl felt like it helped this. I did consider changing her race because the racial aspect is uncomfortable to me. But making her Chinese with poor grammar fit with the power shifts. At first she has the power over these white men even though she’s small, then she loses power to the stud, then she gets it back teasing the Australians, loses it again to the stud, then ultimately transforms into a sex goddess who loves the extreme nature of the orgy. All that being said I’m considering taking it down or changing her race, if thats possible.
Very fun and interesting story. Many white boys like Brad and Phil believe Asian women will be impressed by small dick. Quite a few Asian women play along and tell below average guy "oh so big". Pixie is right, "Girls, it's a lie that all white men have bigger penis."
The variety of comments makes me laugh! Yes, funny at first. WTF, i thought the way you had Pixie speak was perfect, not racist at all. But...this is so not nc. It is not even hard bdsm. i hope you can put together a really nc story about "us."
its highly racist
that sodomy w/o lube just ruins the mood
even earlier he raped her not even caring if he might actually do some permanent damage to her vagina
i thought he actually liked her when in his version he considered her his future wife
but suddenly now when she really likes him back he decides to be arrogant bitch about it and decides he will rather whore her out humiliates her in front of everyone
he forced her to tease them and she did what he asked she complimented about his dick size he should be proud of her instead he let other guys see her getting sodomised naked and humiliate her by cumming on her face
it seems like you and the main male character are highly racist hate asians so much that you decided to humiliate the girl who you in previous chapter said has pleasured the guy so much that he wanted her to his wife
what kind of man humiliates his supposed to be wife whose in love with him in front of other guys
this is her reward to fall for him?