by 88girfriend
This was a cute little story love, but you seem to have forgotten the sex. Maybe you should have posted this in non erotic. JMHO cheers.
OK so this story and the other two that will soon follow were supposed to be in the non erotic category but literotica put them here. I guess that makes scenes but was not my plan. As I have said before, "I'm just the writer."
What was the reason he came in the room? Did he come to as Liz something or an order?
Great start, looking forward too seeing Edmonds journey of discovery with "Helen" and his reaction.