All Comments on 'Tipsy Cuckqueen'

Could be a good story but I gave up. 2nd person POV is difficult to follow.

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Stories should rarely be written in the second person like this. Not a bad attempt but really awkward to read as a result.

I learned a new word today: compersion.

Just silly

I love this one because I love eating pussy..

The story line is not too bad, but the PoV is pretty much the worst one to write from. I'd like to see this written in first or third instead.

Ended a page or so early. Lots to be explored in the rest of the visit. Then the coming drama after the friend leaves. This is unfinished.

Can't see anything but a divorce out of that mess.

Hard to keep track of who was speaking

Sexy, hot, erotic, and what a dream. The ladies are quite convincing...

There is missing that this could be a test, it's not really a "vow" if you give it up when someone says you can.

The narrator's voice is a little clunky, and this entry lacked the title "Chapter One."

Those are the three problems, and two of them can be solved with more about these characters....

Was difficult to read with the POV. Funny how when it is two chicks, the cuck haters don't say anything, however this is just another cuck story, only reverse than the usual, doesn't make it any hotter, just another person with low self-esteem and divorce will result in the end.

Really stupid garbage.

Wow