All Comments on 'Tit Lover'

Nice one, DevlinMea, Bravo. The story has legs...your readers will want more, I suspect. We all make mistakes, big and small when we write these stories - whether spelling or grammar.

Check "lose" and "loose." Also check "feint" and "faint."

Good premise.

Sex too mechanical. Too automatic.

Needed more teasing.

Three stars.

Love how Emmanuelle got aggressive and dominant with him..She knows she’s turned him on with her tits and she can get him to beg even for just a little lick, or make him beg to eat her cunt..he’ll do all that because she’s in charge now..He of course has crossed a serious line..she could totally ruin him if she wanted to..so hot.

Good start to a good story. What’s chapter 2 going to bring us??

femdom aspects were a real boner killer. Plus, he's a cheating piece of shit, to boot.

Pretty good.

I actually enjoyed the femdom elements. An interesting change

Very sexy.

I need him to plunge into her wet pussy

Nice premise.

But much too short.

Needed much more dialog about how he liked her breasts. Did he think about them when he masturbated? What did he imagine?

Does he like the taste of her milk?

Can he smell how wet and excited she is? Would he like to show her how much he likes it? With his tongue?

You wrote: "I was sure I was going to feint." You meant FAINT.

Four stars.

Literally a drooling idiot who couldn't utter a single word. Constantly stammering like a dumbass. That wasn't seduction. It was taking advantage of a mentally impaired person.