All Comments on 'Tithonus Gym and Health Club Pt. 01'

OK I'm hooked. This is a very impressive start and I'm already impatient for Part 2.

Looking forward to where you are taking this storyline and our protagonists. 5 stars for the start.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Some men are good people; I am a lesbian, but have known some decent people who are male. That being said, some are just pigs.

Honestly some men are disgusting. I know it's fictional, but it doesn't matter. If not one of those guys came forward, in real life, they're just as bad as the guy that they allowed get away with rape of the person. I'd find him and make him pay if I were the main character's love interest.

Lisa experienced something terrible. She should have sought professional help to deal with the trauma. Ashley has taken advantage of Lisa' vulnerable state. How is being with her suppose to make Lisa stronger. Lisa has replaced trauma with dependence. I know this is fantasy but people need therapy after a traumatic experience. Not the best time to start experimenting.

Revenge is - "JUSTICE!"

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Hallo Author!

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What a ridiculous fucking comment! ... ["You mean you are looking for justice right, not revenge?"] _ Hmmm, I just wonder how you'd feel after your ass was raped, you think maybe you would want a little revenge?

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5-Stars from two new readers,

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GayKat: the militant lesbian. I wonder why you never have this rage when it's female on female? There are a few stories like that on this section. No one calls it rape. They celebrate it as experimenting or seduction. I wonder why?

Freedom until it clashes with your reality.

So why get mad when others don't share your views?

Reply To Anonymous.

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Hallo Anon!

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Ha-ha-ha, ohh I have been called much worse than "GayKat: the militant lesbian.",,, yes!

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Look Anon, I have no love for men and I'm aware this is a fictional story, but my comment was only on Ashley's reaction to Lisa's statement about being raped.

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Rape is always wrong, no matter if the rapists is male or female, it's wrong!

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However there are times that revenge is the only path to justice for certain women.

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Hello, GayKat

The militant lesbian was not an insult it was an observation. Furthermore, it's obvious you don't like men and you have that right. I will reiterate: there are some stories on this site that depict women raping women under the guise of seduction and not a peep from you or other users. [That I Find Disturbing}

From Yin Yang ☯ Anonymous