by JuicyLemons
WONDERFUL EROTIC STORY. TITS ALL ROUND.
EXCELLENT BOTH THE WRITING AND THE STORY.
CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. OF YOUR EROTICA.
Part II was delicious. And after having read both stories back to back, I need to go take care of the raging hard-on these stories have given me.
Had to read chapter 2, as I liked the set up, and some of the imagery and wanted some answers as to what the story was about. Alas, my hopes were dashed. A little more attention to the story elements and characterisation could have made this a really good piece. The abandonment of these elements for just the sex scenes made for a disappointing read. Perhaps all would have been revealed in chapter 3, but it looks like the author is no longer posting submissions.
These are great stories -- generally, I'm not all that into nonconsent/reluctance, but these gripped me from the start and kept me rigid with anticipation. Thank you.
We need more of this. You should also bring in Lactation sessions