All Comments on 'Tits Have Benefits Ch. 03'

You were very successful in what you wanted to do. This was definitely hot. I sure do want to see more along this lines.

Brilliant set of stories, at times grammer, spelling an narration slip at very tiny amounts, but that's just overshadowed by how HOT this is! Maybe the next chapter can concentrate more on Andrea's emotions towards Jane and her (potential) trouble at accepting Jenny? But nonetheless, fantastic work!

Never stop writing this series!! I absolutely love it! Been looking for a good series with this content and haven't found one till now! I love how erotic it is while still having emotion involved. I hate all the abusing domination stories but this has the perfect mix of everything

Thanks for all your wonderful comments,

As regards my gramatical errors, I think that they are mainly typographical in nature, if that makes any sense. For example sometimes I spell a word incorrectly and it get's 'corrected' to the wrong word. I also have a lot of dialog which I do take liberties with, call that artistic license.

I can only say that often I am in a hurry to get my latest story out and as a result I may skip over proof reading all of the story as I should.

Thankyou for overlooking any minor errors in my writing and just in case you are wondering I am working on chapter 4.

What an erotic idea - would love to be a shemale living with four (five if you count Kate, who I hope will join the group) of loving, lusty women. You make my dreams come true with your writing - please continue!

Anne (red_skirt@yahoo.com)

Yes it is a fantasy come true, in writing at least. I have already submitted chapter 4 which is waiting to be approved.

In chapter 4 things take an interesting turn so please watch this space.

I don't know if a story can get better than this seriously it has everything you need. Other than the few errors I'd say it's definetly one of the best stories I've read.

i like how you took jenny from being the powerful domanering person to a somewhat submissive asking andrea to have fuck her in the pussy and ass

Good sexy, I loved it.

Something can make you horny, but it can't be horny. It can be hot, nasty, arousing etc.

That was one hot as fuck chapter. You really manage to outdo yourself.

Very good, you certainly upped the plot line and made me even hotter and wet 💧