All Comments on 'TLC - A Season to Remember'

The story line was great, but you badly need an editor. Misspelled words, wrong words, etc. made it hard to read.

It's an attractive little story line, but you're in serious need of lessons in grammar, spelling, homonyms, and punctuation.

All those errors make for a story difficult to read easily.

Buy a dictionary and get an editor.

-- KVK

Your story has an enjoyable quality about it. Your characters are appealing and the rambling conversational style you use is pleasant to read. Sir, if you're using a Microsoft Word Processor you might want to consider using the spell checker feature. This would perhaps cut down on the complaints about misspelled words. Enjoyable! This being your first story, you'll naturally get better as you continue writing. Look forward to your next story.

Uncute language errors