All Comments on 'To Betray a Master Ch. 01'

You certainly write very well, with errors being of only the proof reading kind. As to your question on the forum: No underaged characters in any sexual situations of any kind whatsoever are permitted. "Toning it down" won't help. You need to either make the characters at least 18 or remove the scenes of "groping" and getting to "third (or even first) base." Hope that helps.

Good luck with your writing. It's very good!

First you break the rape rule; story is removed. Now you push the boundaries of the 18+ rule. Maybe Lit isn't the site for you.

All the characters in this scene are 18+. The previous commenter was answering a question I had about future chapters I was going to publish. But thanks for being super helpful and not at all judgmental.