All Comments on 'To Catch a Merchant Princess Ch. 01'

good descriptive writing and character development. Liking this very much.

I look forward to the next chapter.

This is good work. Although I'm not familiar with your previous work, this story looks very interesting. Carry on!

-- KK in Texas

I admire the deft way in which you painted the scenery. Too much scenery bugs the crap out of me. For that reason, I tend to stay away from it. But in your story, I read the scenery paying close attention looking for the means of help she was seeking. I didn't even realize I was doing this until I saw your comment at the end. Very sneaky oh silly one!

This is really very good!

I love that you're putting more detail into your work, having read Danica, SOTM, and the off shoots of that world. I vastly enjoyed this chapter.

Exactly what I was looking for! Thanks!

Loving it.

As always, realistic and interesting.