All Comments on 'To Claim the City'

Is there more to this story??

I like the story, it's well written, but I can't say that any of the characters are too likable just yet, except Jake, and we don't know him too well yet. First Nelson and Lea hide part of themselves from him, and then are party to helping Rachel change him without his knowledge? Curious to read more, but it seems like this would raise some issues.

Finally a "story" worth reading on it's own> BUT, the sex was great to. Thanks.

work his tongue furiously at her puppy lol