All Comments on 'To Find Love Again'

Thanks for a beautiful love story. You clearly have the ability to tell a story well and to become a great writer. I would suggest you proof your stories before posting by reading them out loud. Also,if possible, have a friend proof them as well. I look forward to your stories with eager anticipation.-Christie

You lose your keys, but your pants are loose.

I've given you three stars to encourage you but there is a lot wrong with 'To Find Love Again'. Your spelling and grammar are very shaky and in many parts of the story the writing was just plain careless/clumsy (example: "She spread Lori's leg apart as far as it would go..." Has Lori only got one leg? It would make her trail running very difficult!). You need to get to grips with spelling and grammar and you must learn to read over your work very carefully and correct silly mistakes such as the example above. Either that or find yourself a good editor.