All Comments on 'To Have a Sweetheart - David Ch. 04'

I love how the characters are developing and learning about each other and themselves. A smart, sexy story!

What a beautiful story. You are a fantastic writer. I adore these characters. I can’t wait to read more of David and Luke. Thank you for sharing.

This is a great story so far! I just have one comment: it should read “too little”, not “too less”. But other than that, I’m really enjoying their relationship.

A really good heartfelt story. Would deserve a cleaning for the typos and a re-upload.

It’s been a long time since I’ve added multiple chapters to my Favorites, but this story is so powerful I want to remember multiple chapters. This line: "I don't think I ever really loved before you”… nearly did me in. An inspiring love here. An aspirational love. Kudos Author!