All Comments on 'To Have a Sweetheart - David Ch. 05'

Beautiful writing, beautiful characters, beautiful story development-you are a very talented writer. One of the best stories on here 😍

Beautiful story! I hope you continue it. Will they keep the farm?

This is one of the sweetest love stories I have ever read on Literotica. Your write very well and I hope their story will continue.

To all those curious, I'm still working on this story to continue, but well... working in hospitality during covid takes a toll on even the best of us. Anyways after being stuck on 3k words for nine months, I'm finally progressing again! Hopefully not too long to go :)

Brilliant, beautiful, epic love story. David’s inner monologue and asides are pure gold! Reading their intimate moments, all, not just the sexy stuff, is exciting and tiring! Even if you leave us here permanently, thank you kaitslou. What a gift you’ve shared.