All Comments on 'To Her Taste Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lovely teenage perspective on relationships 9/10

R41NB0YR41NB0Yover 2 years agoAuthor

Teenage? Fuck off

Roz87Roz87over 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this story! Can't wait for more

The fact that he's hesitant makes it all the more hotter too

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thats pretty good i can't wait for next episode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm jealous of him. Would love this life....keep on writing..please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very entertaining. Wish I was Marcus 🤣 constructive criticism here, proofreading is your friend and will make your writing better. There were a few grammar mishaps. They didn't subtract from the quality of the story, but they're worth fixing. Good work for your first post.

R41NB0YR41NB0Yover 2 years agoAuthor

Yeah, I noticed it too lol. I was just sort of anxious about the quality and decided to post it, the next chapter will have fewer mistakes now that I know people actually like the story lol.

R41NB0YR41NB0Yover 2 years agoAuthor

next chapter will be out around new years

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great Start. Very interested in the direction you are going to take. Can't wait till next chapter

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

A good read.

Kinky and sexy.

Perhaps a quirky type of romance.

Yes, and arousing.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best story I've read on here

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