by R41NB0Y
I really enjoyed this story! Can't wait for more
The fact that he's hesitant makes it all the more hotter too
Very entertaining. Wish I was Marcus 🤣 constructive criticism here, proofreading is your friend and will make your writing better. There were a few grammar mishaps. They didn't subtract from the quality of the story, but they're worth fixing. Good work for your first post.
Yeah, I noticed it too lol. I was just sort of anxious about the quality and decided to post it, the next chapter will have fewer mistakes now that I know people actually like the story lol.
Great Start. Very interested in the direction you are going to take. Can't wait till next chapter
A good read.
Kinky and sexy.
Perhaps a quirky type of romance.
Yes, and arousing.
Looking forward to the next chapter.