All Comments on 'To Hire a Cheerleader Pt. 03'

Supreme writing. Great story! Keep on!!

I'm really enjoying this story both for the plot itself as much as for the dialogue and for the descriptions. This whole story is coming together so well! Shades of "Beauty and the Beast" and Mike Hammer's detective novels keep running through my mind as I read.

I'm really looking foreward to the next chapter!

Kydreamer

Hope to see the missing part soon! I'd assumed you were trying to keep his "story" private as some kind of literary device, but it just didn't work - since we've been following her all day every day, it's bad form to intentionally just up and skip a part!

I'm glad I was wrong - it would have been the only "bad" thing about this wonderful story so far!

Guys - this is JewelTran - the story is all here now. The missing chapter was chapter 7 and it has been added to this part of the story. Sorry for the confusion - hope you enjoy it!